Kommentarer till Niklas Törnlund "Jag går mot ett grönt rop"

Av: Lisa Benton

Lisa Benton — Mon, 21 Feb 2011 20:11:11 +0000

Human Nature {lisa benton}
I want so-to grow in Timothy’s favorite garden
My roots planted deep into his finest soil
He could watch me grow from his back window
With his special nurturing I will struggle out
In his warm sunlight I will bloom
As he passes by my fragrance will cover him only
My brilliant colors reflect the beauty of my maker
reminding him -that he is the creator
My pedals soft- protected by a strong stem of prickly thorns
He waters me with his pride as I gaze up into his eyes of understanding
When he departs at dark -I flourish waiting for his
return
As the moon blames the sun he takes longer and longer it seems
He finally arrives with his knee to the ground -in fogging echos he gasps
As he kneels before me in a wintry frost I chill
In his trembling voice I shiver
His tears are like warm rain falling down upon me
Silvery tools sharp reaching out to grab me
As they cut I begin to wither
Swiftly across the yard I am being carried by his gentle hand
He places me in a vase high up inside his back window
There I could see the garden where I once grew
My pedals now dropping on the wood scattered red-
watching Timothy staring out beside me
two gazing sorrows bleeding in silence are pleading-
I want so- to grow in Timothy’s favorite garden and perhaps one day -he will pick me
again

Av: Lisa Benton

Lisa Benton — Mon, 21 Feb 2011 19:18:14 +0000

Niklas-I am an American who lives in Los Angeles,Ca-I am a singer/songwriter and poet.I can not read any other language or understand you on You Tube.:( but more so to say- I have found some of your poetry translated on the web.Find it fascinating as the spoken word. I’d like your opinion on one of my poems. Also-would love to hear you sing in English!! Could you send me recent pics of you. You’re sense of fashion is awesome!! You could one be any cooler? Hartsb4u@aol.com

Av: Niklas Törnlund

Niklas Törnlund — Wed, 21 Jul 2004 11:42:37 +0000

Bra att det är rättat.
I övrigt finns det som sagt flera saker i din recension som jag tar till mig. Food for thoughts...

Niklas

Av: Csabi Urban

Csabi Urban — Sat, 03 Jul 2004 21:06:40 +0000

Pinsamt känns det. När jag kommit åter från stugan ute på Hisingen där jag kunde höra det där gröna ropet ifrån skogens grönska...

Slarvigt. Tar i samma andetag tillbka första raden i recentionen. Vad kan någon som skriver fel titel säga om titeln!

Csabi

Hoppas att allt är gott ändå som sagt,

Av: Anders Edwartz

Anders Edwartz — Sat, 03 Jul 2004 07:38:48 +0000

Rätt. Tack för påpekandet, jag har ändrat det nu.

Av: Niklas Törnlund

Niklas Törnlund — Fri, 02 Jul 2004 21:50:04 +0000

Intressant att läsa recensionen; den kändes personlig & uppriktig.
Men min bok heter faktiskt "Jag går mot ett grönt rop" och inget annat, Csabi!

Allt gott,
Niklas Törnlund